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Tuesday, January 17, 2012

I'm in a New Class

I've enrolled in the UWP's Literacy and Technology course this winter. The seminar is being led by Rebekka Andersen.

Maintaining a blog is one task in the course. I've been keeping a blog for a while, as my 3 readers know, but I'm looking forward to the added direction. This week I'm posting a literacy narrative with a focus on how technology has impacted my reading and writing. Normally I won't explain a post's aim like this, but I thought the shift in focus might merit an explanation for those who have visited before.

Below is a video of a spokesperson from the Hunt Institute talking about his institute's take on 'literacy in other disciplines' as seen through the lens of the common core standards. You can watch it if you want. The man says nice things, sounds smart, and paints a wonderful picture of the value of literacy in science and history. I want this guy to be right about what school can achieve, but this task of composing a literacy narrative has me feeling skeptical. When I listen to someone describe students acquiring broad cultural literacy via a formal process, I can't help thinking about how messy that process was for me personally - a white, Midwestern, middle class, heterosexual male; I'm the kind of person for whom the system was designed... when it was designed over a century ago. 


So, how is a formal education system to inculcate literacy across disciplines to a diverse population in a world where literacy is changing at the speed of technological development?

I don't know the answer to that question, but I think developing a narrative of an event that contributed to my literacy could be a point of departure.

When I was in eighth grade, every assignment in our English class was geared toward the composition of a large autobiography. Each student was to assemble final drafts of all the assignments into a binder, personalize the collection of assignments with photos and additional writings, and put finishing touches on what would be read as one coherent work. A select few of the projects would be judged by a panel of parents who would declare one student "The Author of the Year."

I would love to say that I set my sights on that prize the day it was announced, but I was not that kind of student. I was a reader, but I rarely read the assigned texts. I would occasionally complete a writing assignment, but only if the assignment grabbed my interest. In short, I was a bad student. My teacher told me as much when she pulled me aside a few weeks before the final deadline and expressed her concern. "Hogan, I know you have some good ideas, but I haven't seen any of your revised work yet. I'm afraid that you don't have enough time to complete your autobiography, and if that happens, you won't pass eighth grade."

I cried.

Don't feel bad. That was nothing new. I was a crier back then.

But when I stopped crying, I decided that my teacher was clearly in the wrong. While I may not have had my autobiography written, I had a lot of rough drafts, and more importantly, I had been thinking about the project quite a bit. I just needed to sit down at the computer and type it all up.

Word processing before fonts.
So the weekend before the year long project was due, I booted up the family PC, entered the appropriate MS-DOS commands, and had a blank blue screen of the early MS word processing software.

I got to down to the business of putting my ideas on the page. I had a lot to say. All the thinking I had done in the run up to the writing had the words flowing from my mind to my fingertips.

And that's when I realized I was a lousy typist.

It was bad. Hunting and pecking really isn't a fair description, because I spent so much time hunting.

After taking more than three hours to write one full page, I did the math and realized there was no way I would finish the project before Monday... or ever. I had something of a meltdown at that point.

Worth noting here: I am a middle child with an older sister who is the only girl and two younger brothers who are twins. It was a difficult environment in which to effectively communicate my needs. At that stage in my life, the only method of getting attention I had mastered was a horrible melodramatic outburst.

In the instance of the autobiography, this strategy worked. My folks calmed me down and listened as I explained my predicament. They picked up on something I haven't really explained here yet. In my tone my parents heard something they normally didn't associate with my orientation toward school: I didn't just want to finish the project and pass eighth grade; I really wanted to do a good job.

There were a few contributing factors:
  • That year I had started hanging out with a new group of friends, and they were all good students.
  • In seventh grade I had started reading the Xanth fantasy novels, and after finishing a few books with +500 pages, I had begun to fancy myself as a bit of a literary type.  
  • I needed to prove my teacher wrong.
My dad told me that my execution of this whole project was a disaster, but he then told me that he would type if I read aloud the words I wanted to have on the page. We got to work on Sunday morning and did not go to sleep that night (yeah, my dad is great).

I ended up winning the "Author of the Year" award, which was really exciting.


My Autobiography's Cover
But something else happened as well. Throughout that day and night of writing, as my dad and I would print up a final version of this or that portion of the project, I began to compose the whole. I thought about appearance, order, pictures, captions, cover art, and the kinds of details I had never considered before. 

I have awful handwriting and trouble spelling things on the first try. So before using a computer to complete an assignment, I really just wanted to get the required material on the page. Computer publishing put a well-composed document within my reach, and suddenly I was thinking about a reader's first impression.
Double-stick tape, a Sharpie, and dot-matrix printing.

Since that long day of writing with my dad, I have read and composed texts using technology quite a bit. But my appreciation for how technology and composition are woven together stems from this story.

So thinking back to that guy from the Hunt Institute video, I'm not sure if anyone can bottle that kind of experience and make it work for a diverse population of students. But I'm here at UC Davis trying to find methods that will help students discover their own set of circumstances that will lead to a better understanding of literacy. 

6 comments:

Mary Stewart said...

It's really interesting that you wound up dictating the text to your dad. Do you still use audio techniques when you compose? Do you find audio is involved when you read?

Mary

Jenae Cohn said...

Hogan, the pictures of your "autobiography" gave me a fantastic sense of your 8th grade aesthetic. Author of the year, indeed!

How did you grow to gain greater confidence in yourself as a writer? To clarify, I suppose, how do you think you shifted from a kind of reluctant student to a comfortable (dare I even say "prolific?") writer?

Anonymous said...

Excellent post! I think you've encapsulated the mission of this blog and our challenge.

Aaron said...

I am impressed with anyone who can find a way to insert the word "inculcate" into a passage.

More seriously, you have hit on something by connecting your exploration of your own literacy with the need to help others develop their literacies. Perhaps a big piece of the puzzle is convincing students their own values and abilities are important, and a big part of that is encouraging them to reflect on themselves.

That said, perhaps the thing that impresses me most is that you still posess any artifacts from your childhood schoolwork. : )

Rustam Jamilov said...

Great story. I always thought that students want a personal approach, an individual one, since as someone once said: everyone is talented but if you force a fish to learn how to fly and take a bird under the water, then both will think they are useless. It's hard to find the time and/or effort to inspire everyone for a more "spiritual journey" that composition (and life in general) is, because class sizes can vary from 6-7 to 600, and the burden is just unfair. I guess we must leave that to the students themselves to decide whether they want to become like that guy in the video or build a legacy of their own.
Also, I think you are vastly overestimating the number of your readers.

Rebekka said...

Hogan -- your narrative paints a powerful picture of your journey as a student and writer. The story of composing your autobiography brought tears to my eyes (have you thought about writing this up as a short movie script?). I love how you "show" the writing process and how your story points to the profound influence our "cultural ecologies" have on our relationship with reading and writing. I also love how you "show" how technology and writing are inextricably linked. The "hunting and pecking" visual captures the relationship beautifully.